Comparing the effect of form, structure and language
An important aspect of analysing poems involves making comment on form, structure and language. For a reminder of how to approach this sort of analysis, read the study guide on 'Responding to poetry'.
When comparing the use of form, structure and language in two poems it's important to remember that the poets will have specifically chosen to write their poem in a particular way. They will have thought about how form, structure and language would suit their intended effect. It is particularly important that you think about ways in which form, structure and language link to meaning and effect.
Example question
Read the opening of these two poems and think about ways in which they are similar or different. Try to concentrate on their form, structure and language.
Poem A
Our brains ache, in the merciless iced east wind that knife us鈥
Wearied we keep awake because the night is silent鈥.
Poem B
The Assyrian came down like a wolf on the fold,
And his cohorts were gleaming in purple and gold;
Example response
Just from the opening two lines of each poem, you can already see ways in which the poems work differently.
Which of the following responses do you think works best?
Example A
Byron uses a simile 鈥榣ike a wolf on the fold鈥 which shows how strong the army is. He compares it to a wolf attacking sheep. However, Wilfred Owen does not use a simile which makes his opening less powerful.
Example B
Both poets create a strong visual impression in the opening lines. Byron does this through the simile 鈥榣ike a wolf on the fold鈥, comparing the army to a wolf attacking helpless sheep and showing the army鈥檚 power. Owen鈥檚 use of 鈥榤erciless iced east winds鈥 shows the bitter cold of the wind, and the image of it 鈥榢niving鈥 the soldiers shows its violence.
Feedback
Example B is the strongest response. Although example A appreciates the power of Byron鈥檚 opening, the understanding is weaker because it tries to match up the use of a simile too directly with Owen. Owen鈥檚 opening is not less powerful because it does not have a simile, the poet has just chosen a different approach.
Next step
Think about two poems you have read and focus specifically on comparing the ways in which their form, structure and language contribute to their meaning and effect.