Word choice and tone
Word choice
When considering the language used by a writer, you can think of another word or expression the writer could have used. This will then allow you to compare the word used against an alternative and consider what the advantage was of using the word selected for the text.
Think about the connotationAn idea or image which is suggested by a word, which is not its dictionary meaning, eg the connotation of 'desk' might be school. of the word 鈥 in other words, what do you associate it with?
For example, 鈥榮lender鈥, 鈥榮lim鈥, 鈥榯hin鈥, 鈥榣ean鈥 and 鈥榮kinny鈥 may all have similar meanings but their connotations can be either negative or positive. If asked to comment on the writer's use of one of these words, thinking about the connotations will help you come up with a suitable comment.
Another approach is to consider if the words used are informal or formal. A popular technique is to use a mixture of the two.
You should also think about the effect produced by the sound of words, through the use of techniques such as AlliterationRepetition of a sound at the beginning of consecutive words, such as 鈥榯he big, bold, blue sea'. andonomatopoeiaThe sounds of words to express or underline their meaning, eg 'crunch', 'pop'..
Tone
Tone refers to the attitude that a writer conveys towards a subject. A writer may be passionately for or against a particular topic and express this through various means.
It could be that emotional language is used - this is known as an emotive tone. Humour can be applied either affectionately or mockingly.
Other kinds of tone you may encounter in a piece of writing include light-hearted, ironic, sarcastic, angry, gloomy, anxious, joyful or sorrowful.