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Dear reader,
You are reading this cause... you want to.
This is about me. I was born May 23, 1991 in Provo, UT. I'm 13 right now, and I go to Dixon Middle School as an 8th Grader. The story that posted barely was written by my brother and edited by me, it is about 60 pages long and we need some advice to see if the historical events are correct and more ideas. We want the book to be about 200+ pages, so we have to cram in a lot of information. Please help. thnx! If you have any suggestions post on the... (I don't know where)but you can go somewhere and find it, the title is Captured Behind Enemy Lines, and it's pretty good and you might enjoy it. Good Luck reader.